Thank you very much for your patience while we took a break. The break allowed us to tweak/improve the story, begin building a buffer of pages, as well as work on some fun merchandise that I'll be revealing shortly.
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Story, lettering & character drawings by me
The art is excellent and Naviira's backgrounds are stellar. I especially like Swift's style of dialogue, it's been quite loose, sarcastic and smug for the past few pages.
However, there was one word that stuck out to me, "unlikely". It seems a bit too "formal" and "proper" for a chase scene and I pictured it as something more quick and brusque. Like, "my ass", "like real", or "you can try". I don't know it's just what I feel.
Otherwise it's been an excellent ride so far, great work! I'm wondering if Swift plans to climb up the tree to shorten the distance and leap to the other side. But well, we can only wait :3
+ I feel like the skidding paws thing could have been applied between panels 4 and 5 of this page www.deviantart.com/art/The-Bla…
so we have this pattern of action(skidding)>response(facial reaction)>cause which is pretty good for building suspense as seen in this page :0
note that while I don't go to art or film school I do attend some literature classes and I'm trying to give critiques to the best of my ability but it's limited and I hope I don't annoy you too much <3
By the way I wanted to wish you all the luck with the reborn of the comic! I remember BBA being shown to me something like 8 or 9 years ago, and thanks to it I began drawing canines (same story for many of us lol ) and years later I'm still at it and went a loong way, so it's been quite the surprise to see you quit a comfortable job to bring this comic back to life! It's a huge throwback in time. And it's pleasant seeing how far you've come yourself as the quality has incredibly improved!
So good luck and stay strong, apparently this comic never really lost its readers
There is something very strange about these stylized -dare I say cartoony- characters saying vulgar things. Personally, it feels a bit dissonant.
Okai sorry, Rick & Morty are very bad for my person
Kay, you are a badass artist, and you're 1 (of 3) of my all-time favorite artist! LOVE your work!